This is pretty interesting to read, I've never really seen this type of non-human video game style. There are some typos here and there but can be easily brushed off. World design is very intriguing, I can see many good arcs and stories coming from this novel already. Character design does need polishing unfortunately, some of the characters are really unbearable and MC just let's it slide. You could let it slide but not in such a annoying fashion is what I would say. That's all from me. Enjoy reading!
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