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Great development of the story. Nice buffing up the main character. Good focus on the main character. Maybe should focus on other character that have the Beta System.

The Beta System

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Thanks for reading and the suggestion. I don't know about focusing on the other characters though. I mean, I know the title is "The Beta System", so like I should probably focus on the systems more, but I don't really have any plans to do that. I'll most likely center the story around Clinton, and I'll be surprised myself if I actually did focus on other characters with the Beta System.