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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv53yr
2021-02-07 01:24

I am not interested in 38 chapters of child mc. Just no. In a another way, story is average, mostly because I don't like kinks that's used. Eh, that's the only way I could describe smut story. P. S. Light femdom and infantilism - really makes me uncomfortable after some time. BTW, earl doesn't feel like аdult in child body, after like 10 chapters he feels like a genuin horny kid. So I kinda doesn't see any point of being reincarnated...

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Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I don't know that mommy kink was so popular ,I mean op mommy that's doing everything for you is. ..ugh.

TentacleEthics
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thank you for the review. I totally understand the discomfort haha. I have to be in a certain mood to write this story. if you decide to not drop this novel and stick around, you'll see why I used the reincarnation trope. I would say that because he's a child right now and he can't really do anything, his personality can't show itself but when it does, it would be pretty satisfying. if you're dropping the story now, thanks for following the story to now :)

Yuri_is_Ntr
Yuri_is_NtrLv5

I kinda lost hope reading chapter after chapter about kid. And of course how his great mommy being the best thing in universe because she sucked so good and so strong. Novelity just wears off, and when I come face to face with actual characters and story...there wasn't anything .

TentacleEthics:thank you for the review. I totally understand the discomfort haha. I have to be in a certain mood to write this story. if you decide to not drop this novel and stick around, you'll see why I used the reincarnation trope. I would say that because he's a child right now and he can't really do anything, his personality can't show itself but when it does, it would be pretty satisfying. if you're dropping the story now, thanks for following the story to now :)
TentacleEthics
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that was a valid criticism. I will keep it in mind

Yuri_is_Ntr:I kinda lost hope reading chapter after chapter about kid. And of course how his great mommy being the best thing in universe because she sucked so good and so strong. Novelity just wears off, and when I come face to face with actual characters and story...there wasn't anything .
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