Review Detail of Bonbonbla in Demon Slayer: Thunder And Moon

I'm not much of a Author, but an advice as a reader, focus more in the mc's and his pov in the early chapters, chapters dedicated to some side characters u just introduced is Booring in early chaps, with slow update and weak mc that doesn't do that much yet but get flashback and spitting heroic speech, writing is great, this just miss something that makes readers stay and keep reading, first arc was fine, the latest is stretchy with chapters u can just skip to the more interesting chapter "title" with actions only to find side characters and the mc monologueing what to do and being weak. don't let this bring u down but up instead, unless this is just your hobby Really. I've been cooking my own novel to

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