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The_One_Above_You
The_One_Above_YouLv54yrThe_One_Above_You

this will be the best DxD fanfic ever and will Make for a Cool Badass Mc that will become the greatest in DxD world so far it's too great , author is simply a genius just by coming with this idea of mc being Lucifer and Gilgamesh descendant i mean how badass and cool he will be his full name will be Sparda Gilgamesh Lucifer . am i the only one that is excited for this i mean descendant of Lucifer the Origin of all Devils and Gilgamesh the Fist Hero , King of Heroes , The one to Unit the world under his rule in ancient time , The King of Urus this many Titles are just enough to give him a lot of Fame and everyone will look at him in awe and respect , well he can earn it himself too with his powers he is meant for greatness i wish mc doesn't turn into evil or Anti-Hero this is not a hero world at least so far i wish he continue being battle maniac but also be calm , collected , intel , veteran warrior , tactician , kind , caring for his friends , family ( Vali ) , and be more carefree and a little lazy this would make his personality a little funny also i hope if there is a harem some of my suggestion for future harem in the far future are Tsubaki (Please i like her but everyone ignore her) Sona ( pair Saji with Ruruko don't like jealousy things) Serafall (Like how childish she is and hos hot her body is even though it is childish) Gabriel (the only Angel and most beautiful one , innocent and pure i like her too much , but needed to somehow in far future change the heaven system as to not make her fall and become a fallen angel) Seekvira ( with this you can tell i have thing for glass girls and you are right they are simply being ignored always that break my pervert heart and mind Kuroka & Yasaka (Only animal girls or if you want add Koneko since she is cute and all but the two womens prove to be insane beautifull and have sexy hot bodies and i like how they dress and mostly their breasts are the best ) as for lolis there are three of them in my mind Ophis and her clone (Lilith) 'count as one', Koneko and Ravel ( can be called Oppai loli since her boobs are developped to the level of asia or even bigger while being younger and smaller) if you want my opinion on NTR the only ones i'd want to take are Venelana and Grayfia but if so i'd even like their background be changed to not being married at all and change their place with some oc from the same house they can even be their sisters since Venelana is a Bael and Grayfia is a Lucifuge ohhh how i like this two to be add i am really a greedy bastard ohohoho my inner greedy pervert scream **please author make this choices real while sobbing tears of blood , my inner pervert scream for the perfect harem**

DXD: Golden King of Lucifer [COMPLETED]

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DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6DragonkingKyo

he should also take the rest of issie's harem(Rias, Akeno, etc and maybe turn the Gasber into a girl)

Ezukejyll
EzukejyllLv6Ezukejyll

Lol.

TNT_Subho99
TNT_Subho99Tác giảTNT_Subho99

Thank You for your support

The_One_Above_You
The_One_Above_YouLv5The_One_Above_You

no worries bro i like this book and i am honest in everything i said

TNT_Subho99:Thank You for your support
Harem_fan
Harem_fanLv5Harem_fan

We need to add the No NTR tag too.

Tennouji_Kotarou
Tennouji_KotarouLv4Tennouji_Kotarou

I didn't understand you ... But after seeing you in several works, I finally understood ... You like a novel where Mc is the most powerful of all, without exception ... I like Mc strong, but I much prefer more those that get stronger gradually ... In many novels I see that you complain about many things, because you want Mc to be more Op, more and more ... Glad you found a novel that fits your taste. ..

The_One_Above_You
The_One_Above_YouLv5The_One_Above_You

OP mc is one reason second one is not changing the original too much if possible make minor changes in addition to making the mc bind into the story perfectly that is as much i can tell about myself and what type of fanfiction i like oh there is another fanfic i like in fanfiction.net named {Crimson Dragon Emperor and Crimson Eyed Knight} it have 79 very very long chapters ( 79 chapter have 1 million word count ) the mc us issei younger twin have naruto element in it read it you may find it good if you don't know but if you know then just forgot what i said well then also i never take my comment fir complaining but my intent is suggestion and my honest opinion that's all for me but maybe the way i write thel make it look like i complain

Tennouji_Kotarou:I didn't understand you ... But after seeing you in several works, I finally understood ... You like a novel where Mc is the most powerful of all, without exception ... I like Mc strong, but I much prefer more those that get stronger gradually ... In many novels I see that you complain about many things, because you want Mc to be more Op, more and more ... Glad you found a novel that fits your taste. ..
Demonzor
DemonzorLv14Demonzor

What’s the point of a fanfic if the mc is basically a super strong background character

The_One_Above_You:OP mc is one reason second one is not changing the original too much if possible make minor changes in addition to making the mc bind into the story perfectly that is as much i can tell about myself and what type of fanfiction i like oh there is another fanfic i like in fanfiction.net named {Crimson Dragon Emperor and Crimson Eyed Knight} it have 79 very very long chapters ( 79 chapter have 1 million word count ) the mc us issei younger twin have naruto element in it read it you may find it good if you don't know but if you know then just forgot what i said well then also i never take my comment fir complaining but my intent is suggestion and my honest opinion that's all for me but maybe the way i write thel make it look like i complain
The_One_Above_You
The_One_Above_YouLv5The_One_Above_You

i love it this way , also there are some animes with mc being very strong in the world 1- Overlord 2- Demon king of another world 3- Slime named Rimuru (fast growth)

Demonzor:What’s the point of a fanfic if the mc is basically a super strong background character
raghavjpr
raghavjprLv14raghavjpr

Totally OP MC have there own charisma

The_One_Above_You:i love it this way , also there are some animes with mc being very strong in the world 1- Overlord 2- Demon king of another world 3- Slime named Rimuru (fast growth)
noobageddon_
noobageddon_Lv13noobageddon_

His background sure is cool but it matter not cuz of his power. It just gives other expectation that he should be really powerful. Even if he is an orphan he will still enjoy high status cuz of his powers. I love super cool badass OP mc but, i dont like stupid mc. Even if the mc is OP.

Noire
NoireLv14Noire

Would recommend you darkshiro author from fanfiction.

The_One_Above_You:i love it this way , also there are some animes with mc being very strong in the world 1- Overlord 2- Demon king of another world 3- Slime named Rimuru (fast growth)
Noire
NoireLv14Noire

Nevermind, I thought you loved OP MC. What did I find? A weakling. Not just a weakling but the WORST kind of weakling. Having all these gifts and can only deal with mob characters lolz, what a useless weak MC.

Noire:Would recommend you darkshiro author from fanfiction.