I've enjoyed this thoroughly it has a good enough magic system and a lot of things are thought out quiet well. If I had to point out one minor issue I have based on how far I have read its that his abillity to use magic IRL feels a little abrupt. Maybe I missed something but it does feel like it appeared a bit out of the blue, the build up was fine but his casting of his magic hand did feel to simple.
Soaring Flames
Liked it!
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