Review Detail of MadaraUzumaki in System Helps Me Become Godly

Alright dude’s and dudets im a new writer in highschool and i would like for people to give me a review of what i should improve or how i could make things better so u can say anything you can even trash talk the book either way itll stoll help me improve so do your worst or best so shamless author out *mic drop and run away*