Item: The Broken System: King Breeder
Rating: 4

BlackturtleLv34yr

2020-05-25 16:49

Okay...this novel is a good one. Reading from the prologue I got confused but sliding through chapter 1 and still flipping through, I got it now. This is one interesting imagination the author is displaying here. And I love your characters 🤙🤙.

The Broken System: King Breeder

whoknowwhat

4.4

59 Chs

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