I have to say that I love the story especially since Jun is kinda similar to me🤣. I honestly find a little humor though when I read and notice some words that are misspelled but because I know what you meant I read it just fine. You also tend to phrase things wrong....in a way. I dont wanna spoil but I would just try to keep an eye out on your material. I would suggest having someone review your work before publishing to point out any incorrect words, gender identification, phrases, and more stuff like that
Arba
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