Review Detail of Keyang27 in Project New World

Yeah, sorry just couldn’t get past the really rough translation. I keep coming back and trying a few more chapters but had to give up. Right now most of the characters are pretty flat with weird spikes of personality that don’t always match. The story is also lacking descriptions and details, while reading like a list. Congrats on writing and please keep up the hard work. Everyone starts somewhere and it is already more than I can do.