Review Detail of Regius_Sanguis in Beastchanger

Kay, so this is my review for this story! :) Writing quality is great. Story development as well, along with character design and the world background. I can say much about the stability of updates because I'm sure you have real life situation to deal with. What I can say about is that the story moves at great pace. It's not too slow nor is it too fast, it's just right. The inclusion of suspense and mystery is great too. It was detailed and obviously modeled after how books are read. There was even one paragraph that made me want to puke by the image that the words made me imagine. That's strong in my opinion, so the writing quality is superb. I give this story a 4.4/5 I just wished that the paragraphs in the first few chapters were separated. For better reading, that is. The paragraphs of where the character's thought are placed should be separated to make it easier on the reader to read the chapters. This story just needs a bit of polishing, but other than that, everything else is great! :)