The story was not bad by normal standards but the grammar is so bad I feel like I got a migraine just from reading it . I mean what language translate devil in to dark wing race , angel in to white wing race and fallen angel into black wing race and the POV is simply horrendous and the way the characters talk is just off putting
Raylight25
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