Review Detail of Kromal_ in Ain't Your Regular Girlfriend

I don't know the rest because I'm only at 2nd chapter but stil I got headache(nausea maybe? something like that lol) from reading this. Sentences often start with lowercase letters, maybe not really a problem but stil, this shit """" is at the begging so you know when there is dialogue but not the end like: "Where are you going? I ask her. The writing is just so weird, not the worst but not really good or just good either. I need to reread sometimes because I don't fucking know when these bitches are done talking.