Review Detail of DyingAeon in Trace System

Hey, this is author-san ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡° ) I'm here to make an honest review of my story (￣^￣)ゞ First of, the writing quality is average as there is no editor and English is not my first language. You wouldn't read an incomprehensible novel, trust me. It's easy to read and it doesn't have any obvious grammatical errors. I might have a few typos tho ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=ε=┌(;￣◇￣)┘ Nonetheless, this baby of mine is an interesting one. Read the first five chapters and you'll see it's not like other novels. It's hard to go through unknown areas of imagination and I don't know where this will take me, but let's hope it's an interesting journey. Please enjoy. (￣▽￣;)