It's not bad for time being considering author previous work. No harem or harem. I don't really care. War of horny dogs and short-sighed people is retarded. If story isn't focused on relationships, story is main priority. I don't read romance focused novels, so I despise all of those people who fight against harem. If I remember correctly there is 2 thousand years of works with monogamy domination. You can just focus on this :D 4 stars for Writing quality/ Stability of updates. Story dev. 2 stars for now. It's just slow paced fanfic in MCU. Not much happened. I might update this review if story starts to actually progress. Character design? 2 stars. I don't feel anything much from characters. At least not yet. If only MC will be different and no other unique changes. I will lower it to 1 star as it's not your creation. World? 1 star. If you don't anything unique to Marvel world. It's gonna stay as 1 star. I will come back later. Don't make this like Kenichi...
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