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Sorry about this poor rating. It's just I can't handle any more cliches. Furthermore you just dump things without even explaining it. SO yeah, I'm gonna drop this. Just good luck though. PSST. Improve your work without using cliches. You would have been a great author if you were serious in the character development and not just make the girls the typical -fall in love- with Mc. The Mc also has an attitude that would cause so annoyance even with development. But anyway this is just a rant.

The Legacy of Son Goku

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