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I like to apologise in advance since I'm not that good at making reviews. As someone who rarely reads books like this, this book has me intrigued. I decided to read until the 10th chapter to get a good grasp of the story and so far it has been very interesting. The plot of the story caught my attention, especially of it being related to agriculture. Kudos to the author for this! The detailed description of each scene made it easier to visualise and shows how much effort the author has shown. Even the characters were well-written as well. The world building of the author is something to appreciate as well. My only problem is that it took me awhile to realise that the characters were conversing with each other. It would be nice to use " " to indicate that there's a dialogue happening between characters. There were some grammatical errors, but it's minor mistakes that could be easily overlooked. Keep up the good work author!

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

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Thank you very much for your comprehensive review. I agree with the reviewer, the dialogue is not very good for me so far. I will try different options. With appreciation