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your chapters are pretty long which is nice. webnovel readers like it this way. however, I'd advise you to shorten your synopsis a little it. some of us readers prefer a short, simple yet straightforward synopsis. but apart from that, you did a great job

Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

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Thanks for the valuable advice! Your opinion as a reader and author is valuable to me! I hope at the end of the first part of chapter 100, to begin rewriting, in a new way, taking into account the comments received. With appreciation,