Review Detail of Rxel in Magic Farmer Dara - 2nd Edition

Not usually the type of genre I go for, but the story is unique and detailed. The plot is coming along pretty well, and the characters are believable. The way the author describes the scenes are able to convey to the readers what is happening as the plot unfolds. You may want to note that sometimes you miss out the quotations for speech between two characters. Other than that, there are a few minor grammar mistakes that can be overlooked. Keep up the good work! :)