though its just 1 chapter i can tell this story has potential. i like it. also the writing quality is very good. the only prob is the synopsis. its too short and i wouldn't even bother to check out stories with very very short synopsis. so you could make it a little longer so one can guess what he's gonna read. but apart from that your story is very nice. keep it up
IceSnowball
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