Review Detail of noctifer in Elastic Boundaries

Since this is a oneshot, there are many aspects I can't comment on. Apart from a couple of technical mistakes, the grammar was far better than what you'd usually find on WN. Lots of nice and thorough descriptions. We are introduced to a quiet girl who's suffering, and how she suffers. I believe this would have the potential to turn into a full novel--but once again, this is a oneshot. It's very fragile, just like the name of the story. In terms of development, there isn't really much happening apart from giving us a glimpse into this girl's life. We don't see much of her personality, but we do see the cruelty of the people around her. Yeah, this is a oneshot, but you could still show aspects of her personality. This was also rather short for a oneshot. No idea about the world this was set in--not much background detail was given, apart from the fact that there are nobles in this world. Then again, it is a oneshot. Anyways, good luck with the contest! You have a way with words and emotions, and I'd love to see your next works!