Too many nicknames. Terrible grammar the author promises to improve but never does. The story is like hopping around through time and introducing what I assume is an integral part of the story as if it was a one off character or something and literally changing what pokemon he has every chapter. Like one he suddenly has a nuzleaf we never knew about and then suddenly he has a deino. He has mc encourage his pokemon to fight wild pokemon for no reason then compliments one of his pokemon for stopping the fighting as if he didn't instigate it.
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