Review Detail of Dzone221 in Universal Mercenary System

As much as I like the "Slice of life" thing he got going on it brings lots of predictability and baggage. While the story/mission is hurtfully bland. shoot bad guys, save these people, get money. nothing is explained. while i do get you to want to save it for "later" it's still bland IMO. The reason I'm giving this a 3.4 sorry for that. that its really average and nothing unique is brought on to the table. cliche and the slice of life thing is pretty generic just my opinion here. the guy just adopts a kid out of nowhere and you want it as "Plot"... After the assassination of that child rapist, there is no news, no police, no perspective change. it's just painfully bland and that's all I gotta say I'll still read the novel and its just the starting point here, it will get better/ or worse because only time will tell. I won't give any power stones because there is a lot of better and interesting stories than this. don't hate me for it, its a review and it's my perspective on what I feel about the novel. I'm sticking around to read because its interesting but I hope you add more police and even expect someone to investigate a person who saves them. yeah :P