Review Detail of LonleyTyrant in Devouring Gu Master

I feel that this story has introduced many part to quickly and as a result comes off as rushed and confusing. Not to mention it introduces factors that just appear in my opinion as uninteresting and pointless. I also can't help but compare it to the original work of reverend insanity which results in myself being unsatisfied with this fanfic andwhile I know this is unfair to the author of this story and I fell sorry I just can't stop making the comparison. I reccomend looking at how reverend insanity started, at fang yuan actions and how the world went from their the compare it to your start.