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PierreD
PierreDLv25yr
2018-12-20 06:04

Great introduction. I would rework a bit the description of Asbestos and try to shorten a few sentences. There are a few word repetitions too that could be avoided, such as synchronously

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Thank you for your valuable input. I would take your comments into serious consideration :)

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