Review Detail of minyol in The Sole Skull

I love how honest the character development is. But I felt that Dante needed more negative emotions in him to highlight human nature. He could've been a tad bit scared, just to be a bit realistic. There are many grammar issues that I wish could be fixed. I'm only pointing this out because I want to be as comfortable as possible, considering I'm going to follow this book till the end! The concept of a survival game is not lost on me. It was introduced so smoothly, too. Chapter one truly reels us in a lot. Hoping for more chapters. Thanks for the great read!