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2019-11-28 23:25

I freaking love this novel it is one of the most interesting ones I found in a long time love it Mr author keep on doing a amazing job and I'll give you all my stones :)

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Imrael
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Well so far I'm a chapter 15 I couldn't read anymore the story feels like it came out of someone with either amnesia or has Alzheimer and I mean literally it's like a novelty for me this author is in a category of his own which I have just discovered let me explain: the lack of details which you will see a lot lacking literally, the inconsistencies, the explanations that come chapters after where they are supposed to be I think this is where the Alzheimer part comes in, the stupidity more than normal, the lack of explanation in every part of the MC'S life, and the concept of the story is however the author likes it to be for example if you want to write some s*** beside a reasonable paragraph he does it with no explanation probably because that's how his brain works I don't know how people keep reading this s*** maybe for passing time or whatever but for me my brain can't take it each time I think the author will change I stand disappointed whoever is enjoying the story is either never read a good story or their brain work the same as the author these are the only two reasonable explanations I can find to anyone who says otherwise you're either one or the other of these categories or a new category I don't know (try imagining somebody having to choose between you and a degenerate to give their powers to and what he does is giving super powers to the degenerate instead of you now tell me how the f*** you'll feel that is exactly how I'm feeling when I made this review) the concept has potential however the author screws it up and this is a special one as I said he's in a league of his own first time seeing this kind of screw up I mean I seen others but this is in a league of its own my advice don't read it this is just an advice go with your own risk 😑😑😑

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