Review Detail of SaberTrueno86 in Werewolf in another world

Great story so far, and there's a feeling that the ending could go either way. There are characters being mentioned once then not again at one point, i feel those characters needs to be brought in more, as to see if their story will cross with that of the protagonist. On the other hand it makes the story interesting, you never now where those other characters wil come into play, and what effect it will have on the main protagonist. The main protagonist is a bit strong i must say, it would be interesting to see him tak a fall somewhere, in which he needs to grow in order to overcome the backdraw. Great idea for the world they are in, really takes your mind on an adventure. Keep going, Arthur must fall!