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The writing is criminally lazy, skills and spells from various anime's are thrown around without a care in the world and no explanation is given. It's an anime system, I understand, but when you randomly give out 7 skills that I am not going to remember from Naruto, it becomes a bit jarring. Instead of "You learnt [Blargh Blargh]" it should be "You learnt [Blargh Blargh], a powerful skill that Naruto had used in this scene and that scene, you feel strange wielding the same skill you had seen on television once, the anime does not do the effects justice" or something along those lines. Actually describe the skill and spell instead of just throwing a name at us, does the author expect me to have a wikipedia open by my side all the time? The author also expects you to have read various other animes and novels, such as the novel 'Lazy Dungeon Master', he takes ideas from LDS and literally says "he crafted the golem to allow for more spells, think what the mc did in lds." It's lazy, indeed. The author decided to write it in a way where the reader is 'you' and 'your name', which is jarring and is not done well at all. Character development is non-existent and the writing quality really isn't even worth 2 stars. In conclusion, it's a low-tier time killer.

The Newest Dungeon Master Has An Anime System(Dropped)

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