Review Detail of The_Grindelwald in The Newest Dungeon Master Has An Anime System(Dropped)

I can't even read this, the "mc" don't have a name since the author want to make the reader feel like he is the mc so the mc is "you", it's just so weird and inadapted and if you want to the reader feel like he is the mc then you can't use "your thoughts" and tell what are the thoughts of the mc since it's not our thoughts but your's mc's ones, well in my opinion it doesn't works at all, if you want to make a feeling of immersion just use first perspective, my rating don't judge the story since the "you" bother me too much for continue the story. Sorry for my broken english^^.