Review Detail of DeJeL in Second Chance War

*Remember, this review is based off the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: You're update rate was very fast in the beginning, got slower, then almost completely stopped... this is not very stable... I suggest coming up with a schedule whereas you can write more than your schedule requires and just post them according to the schedule regardless of how many you have written.... also, if you are in the USA (not sure if you are... if not please disregard this part) there is normally such thing as a public library you can access internet from for about an hour a day depending on library.;,;. It seems like (other than chapter 1 which seems like 3K+ words) your chapters tend to be around 2.5K words each... while I think this is fine (from 1K-3K) most like chapter lengths to be 1K-2K staying closest to 1.5K... However, even I think that your first chapter was a bit on the long side... now would I change it, probably not... I just suggest not making any future chapters so long.;,;. I also spotted a single error w/in your first 5 chapters... at one point you talked about how the MC was "unharmed and unharmed" I think one of those were meant to be 'Unarmed' but you typed 'Unharmed' twice.;,;. Positive Feedback: Your story flowed, had a strong MC, interesting plot, and well defined world (our own in our not so recent past). Personal Feedback: I did think you did well, but this story is just not appealing to me... keep up the good work, and don't quit.;,;.