Review Detail of YumGod in Rise of Gods

Hope u can write more and try to fix your grammar even abit is alrdy good and hope u can try to increase more chapter. btw the girl blackrose i think is either dumb or stupid want to kill mc when he can kill an elite monster it a demon monster somemore like is she dumb or too cocky just because she is top 10 for top rookie lol..try to make umm npc abit smart dont make npc like dumb u know like other novel mc everytime get involved with people just because he is good at stuff they are not but in the end he kill thhem ugh this is wat i kinda hate . anyway love your novel for now :3