Item: Harry Potter and the Other Boy Who Lived
Rating: 4.2

boreadLv65yr

2018-12-29 20:23

Avdran (AUTHOR): I have an outline of the next 4 chapters, but this Quidditch issue still leaves me unsatisfied. As the title suggests, I really have no good idea what to do to make Harry become a seeker in his first year at Hogwarts. I feel like pretending an accident is kind of lame. I don't want to do that. So if there is no chapter tomorrow, that is the reason. I'm not satisfied, but the day after there will be two chapters If you have a good suggestion, I'm open to ideas! Thanks for your support! Boread (reader): Dear author, where is the chapter, you said there will be chapter after that day. So sad.

Harry Potter and the Other Boy Who Lived

Avdran

4.5

24 Chs

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