I will shamelessly review myself. First, WRITING QUALITY: 5 STARS I know I have just an okay writing quality but it should be a goal for me to improve my English. I have to encourage myself, you know? Hahahaha. STABILITY OF UPDATES: 5 STARS It should be okay, 5 chapters a week is a promise I can fulfill. It may be more in the future. But I'm writing between 1500 to 2000 words per chapter. That is tiring enough. STORY DEVELOPMENT: 5 STARS I'm really enjoying writing the novel and I will bring a lot of new developments to it outside Harry Potters books story development. CHARACTER DESIGN: 5 STARS, For now, I just created a few, because some already existed in the books, but I believe people's character are a set of all the thing they live in their lives. So as I will be changing some events and happenings, character design will change in relation to the books. World Background: 5 STARS, For now, more than character design, it should be the thing I deserve less stars, but as I said, there will be a whole new World Background outside Harry Potters books background.

BRILLIANT! This is really awesome and sounds very promising I love Neville Longbottom. Neville always had so much potential. I have always thought Neville is one is the most interesting “side” characters of Harry’s world. And Pls DONT STOP HERE

Muito bom. HermionexNeville....................................................................................................................................................................................................

A creative and intriguing premise! I like that he's Neville in another life, rather than a completely new person taking over a body. One of my favorite things about this novel is that it emphasized: the HP books only show a limited view of the world, through Harry's eyes. So there are more complex relationships and underworkings that he doesn't know about behind the scenes. For example, after Voldemort killed off a lot of the world's former largest magic community, what would have happened to them? Other magical powers would certainly be eyeing them. The last stand at Hogwarts wouldn't be the end of it. With only 9 chapters so far, we haven't seen much yet, but the main character is smart without being overconfident. And the original characters from the book aren't treated one-dimensionally or just mentioned in passing. They have actual personalities. So try this out! It looks like a really promising HP fanfic, especially when compared to the rest. Plus, a more confident Neville is definitely something to see. :)

GREAT START BUT AUTHOR MISSING IN ACTION I WISH I COULD SAY MORE ABOUT HOW WELL THIS FANFICTION ABOUT HP WORLD AND NEVILE BUT M.I.A. IS NOT A GOOD THING,,, HOPED FOR GOOD READ BUT THE CLIFT WAS TOO HIGH AS THE AUTHOR NEVER CAME BACK

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This is now dead. Author M I A and precieved to have AWOL. MP have sent the police to apprehend suspect. Suspect still at arge. Suspect is armed and owns over 60 chapters to us . Bounty alive : 888 spirit stones . Dead, +1 review for next couple days

Very good, could have some extra chapters ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................

This fanfiction is awesome. It has all the things people are looking for in a Harry Potter fanfic. The author is able to understand that you need to create a background first and you see that in the first few chapters. If the author bring the book far enough it can be more then just a Harry Potter fanfic, it can be a combination of many different types of books.

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