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Madmaster
MadmasterLv45yr
2019-02-15 10:20

First review i have written and i hope you continue as you have been gone from this for 4 months and this is the best novel about a slime ive read next to the time i was reincarnated as a slime but it is the only one other novel about a slime that i have read anyway please continue.

Overlord Slime

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Jpeck35
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I like the story and concept there is one part where the wording was a little off and I left a comment for the author on that page but otherwise good story if I had to say anything negative it would be that it needs a little more detail like what the scenery is or the monsters it fights look like things like that but I like this story a lot and will be looking out for more eagerly

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cookergirl5
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Katheriner
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Zenobia
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Shameless Author here, with a shameless review. I wrote a novel recently, which is Call of Ring. It was my very first attempt at writing, and there may be some mistakes and errors in it, but I still feel extremely proud of it and enjoy it thoroughly. Please give my story a try and leave some comments for me. Thank you! https://rb.gy/5s05wc

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Dark_SnowMan
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He author I just wanted to see if there was any way i could talk to you i want to talk .....I just wanted to see something and if I could have your permission

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Imperial_Monarch
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8/10 little bit of grammar mistakes Great mc great female mc I love it keep up the great work ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________

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GonkA
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The story was interesting at the beginning but transformed into a standard fantasy story. And a proof reader would be good because there are a lot of errors that could be easily corrected

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