I like the story and concept there is one part where the wording was a little off and I left a comment for the author on that page but otherwise good story if I had to say anything negative it would be that it needs a little more detail like what the scenery is or the monsters it fights look like things like that but I like this story a lot and will be looking out for more eagerly
GoldenSlime
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