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The idea of the story is interesting but all of the jokes and such are ruined because of grammar and spelling mistakes. The only thing I found funny was the part where deadpool denies blowjobs from the guards who bowed to him. Interestingly enough, that joke was almost ruined as well because of the mistakes that the author makes in writing. In addition, the deadpool of this story is really ****ty. Deadpool's thoughts and inner monologues are usually really funny, and have their own style and flair. The author completely fucks it up and mangles deadpool into some weird ass mix between a toned down, unfunny deadpool, and a regular annoying cultivation novel mc. Good job author, you ****ed it up. Ya done ****ed it up.

Deadpool Reborn in a cultivation world.

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