Review Detail of DeJeL in Blossoms of Red

*Remember, this review is based on the first 5 chapters* Constructive Criticism: I give you a warning since your paragraphs are at the high end of acceptable, many who read on webnovel read on their phones, and it tends to be hard for them to read long paragraphs. Also, like I said in an earlier chapter, many who read on this site don't like reading chapters with more than 2k words. I see that the world you are in is one that has royalty, and it seems like it has cultivators, but that's about it... more information on the world would be very helpful, but I know that such is sometimes hard to add without an information dump. Positive Feedback: If I did not mention it in by constructive criticism, I did wholly enjoy it. you did well with your plot and with your character developments thus far. Keep up the good work, and please... FINISH THIS STORY!!!.;,;. Personal Feedback: I likely picked this story up for a review swap, but am glad I did... It is a fun story to read, and will be kept in my library.;,;.