Review Detail of TheDao1 in Midas Touch

The story is interesting. The plot are intriguing. The characters almost well fleshed out. The cons that I can only see is that a bit bad grammar, typos and confirmation on when it would be updated again.... Note: there are mention about flying car in the future (5 year from this present now), but the past technology is that still of ground bound car. So I wonder how the author would make this...