Review Detail of afanficaddict in Technomancer: Genesis

So far, the writing quality has been great. No grammatical errors (or at least, not noticeable), which is a big plus. It also made reading the story much more enjoyable. However, there is still room for improvement, especially with the fight scenes. So far, the plot has been very interesting, and the logical nature of the MC very entertaining. The application of the concept of magical realism has been applied in a logical manner so far, so keep it up!