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A good twist of the plot would have been that Leon also gets stronger by using his ability but keeps it secret until he accumulates enough strength to be invincible. Although I suppose it would only work if you want an ending with the hero losing completely.

It’s the last thing you should expect to find in a netorare story. It’s like I’m reading a war novel and start complaining about the characters not getting killed 🤣

I do not understand the comments that want the hero to win, the title of this work clearly says that goes the plot and in the description puts netorare. If you want something where the protagonist wins there are several ntr with revenge or netori.

Thank you for the chapters. I love how the relationship develops between them all, it is nice and gives a lot of play with the ntr, since you do not know how these feelings can change in the future, if you use it well you can create some exciting situations. You’re doing great with character development.

La historia me encanto pero este final no es lo que esperaba. Siento que sus amistades si terminaron relativamente bien, pero a sus parejas prácticamente las dejo de lado toda la historia, incluso hasta el final solo se le ve con Zhou Xue y parece es que fueran amigos. La pelea final contra el Emperador del Cielo sinceramente fue muy aburrida, cuando lucho contra el Santo Supremo se sintió mucho más emocionante e incluso algunas peleas anteriores a eso fueron mejores. Se nota que se le quería dar un final apresurado, que lastima.

Thanks for the chapters. This is great.

Thanks for the chapters, it’s very good. I love how things go with the mother, the ntr will be great.

Muy buena escritura e historia, es uno de los mejores ntr que he leído. Me gusta que cada personaje tiene carisma y no son simples npc sin personalidad.

This is great, I can’t wait for the MC to get attached to his mother only to have her stolen by Leon. Mother’s ntr is the best.

De lo mejor que he leído, muy buena escritura e historia. Los personajes tienen mucho carisma y el trasfondo del mundo es genial.