phoenix_0209

its a sitcom fic there is nothing more to say about it the updates seem semi stable there are no regular misspellings and is totably redeble in summary its knows what it is and it does that really well

TTFC

fully expected it to be shit but it sint it autualy kinda good haracter motivation is clear power growth is stable though at this current point its more parasyte fanfic then a boys oen mc has returened to boys and it willmost likely become a boy fic soon enough

eris clealy has feeling for him so i dont know if that would work before this chapter i thought that was how it would be concluded both eris and atur would have moved on but eris has not and atur clealy still cares for her that why it would be very hard to pull off but still it can be satisfying still if written properly and i have no doubt it will be if author chooses that route

i can see only three ways by which this may have a satisfying end a harem b either isolode or eris die in some big plot point and great charcter developmen(plese dont author i beg you) c much and i mean much angst between atur and eris when they reunite

thank god its ack i was almost losing hope and once a week is more than fine quality takes time afterall and make it once a month if you have to

what are you going to do with the whole eris plot now or is it going to be made into a harem either way its peak and i ahve no doubt will remain peak

TFTC and amazing work and good to see you back i hope your issue is resolved and solved

there were a thousand factors in nolan defecting it is just as possible that nolan might not defect hell we know that in most timelines nolan stays loyal to viltrum he already knows the timeline is diffrent than orignal and even if this was orignal one it happens all the way in season 3 it is very possible nolon doesnt deffect even if it was the orignal one because of some change which happen by his actions