Butterfly_May_Fly

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another great chapter,bro I am poor otherwise i would have gifted you more ,so I am giving you a pizza slice,to show my appreciation

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I WILL work on it

I am not rating it 5 star , because there is a lot of things you can work on ,but because your story concept is good,iIam hoping good things from you in the future,keep working hard ❤️

your concept is good 👍🏻 but you have to work more on it ,I will out few changes you should make ,1st you should improve your para allignment,too many small lines seems like a poem ,which can irritate readers ,and also writting quality can be better, otherwise it's good,just keep writing 👍🏻 it will eventually improve

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nice starting

hey your novel is very good,it has great potential so I added it to my collection. keep writing, don't stop,I am being your 1st proper supporter . hey you can also check my new book"The Eternal Clan:Rise of the 1st Ancestor" from my profile.give it a read add it to your collection. also don't forget to leave your thoughts on my novel in the comment section,if you like it support me with power stone. we new writer brothers should look out for each other .

nice chapter