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SilentHunter13

SilentHunter13

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  • SilentHunter13
    SilentHunter136 days ago
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    I NEED MORE! Every chapter ended on a cliffhanger! When's the next one coming?!

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    SilentHunter137 days ago
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    Chapter 1 is a strong start to what could be a captivating novel. By developing the supporting characters, enriching the world-building, and exploring a wider emotional range for Tianyang, the author can elevate the story to a higher level. The foundation is solid; now, it needs to be built upon with more detail and nuance. I'm interested to see how the author handles the introduction of Lin Yuqing and the unfolding challenges facing the Celestial Clan.