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Keep going. The story is amazing so far, but try to make the characters act more realistically. It would be better if you included chapters or an internal plot that explains his actions, even if they aren't entirely original. Narrative logic is very important. Some stories make the characters seem like mere characters, not characters with motivations or goals.

The bloodline and Fang Qing's original talent were due to the will of Heaven and the immense inheritance he acquired. Just as one becomes a Venerable through their destined path not because they are specifically the most talented, but because this path is destined for them—like enhancing their experience within their destined path—so too does one become a Venerable through their destined path.

The space path is the best choice, transforming into an extreme structure to keep pace with the story at a high level. Don't be fooled by his current superiority; it's only about the resources he has, and Fang Yuan has no way to acquire resources. At the first opportunity, Fang Yuan will abandon him to the dust.

Where's the fun in seeing what the real Number 17 does? He'll probably eliminate the main threats and then find a planet or corner to become Farmer Thanos.

A truly wonderful story, and most importantly, how deeply the characters are portrayed, unlike in the original story where most of them are meaningless. The original gaps are filled with remarkable clarity; the events aren't canceled, but rather integrated seamlessly, as if the story reveals what the original author didn't include in his novel.

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It's not as strange as it seems. To go to school, one needs: 1- Legal ID, 2- A stable place to live (space or not, no food), 3- Cover. As you can see, when Fury heard about a teenager saving people, he didn't connect it to someone who had just escaped from a research facility. If he had left after a while, suspicions would have arisen. Plus, he didn't really live those 16 years in their entirety; he was a young student in New York in his previous life. So, the idea of going to build a space station was a good one to understand what was happening.

A truly amazing story, but before you continue, please understand intelligent atoms well, as they will easily create conspiracy theories. Don't write any cloning stories, as they are inconsistent; if cloning were possible, the universe would already be full of them. You could write about Nolan as his evil brother instead of a clone, or better yet, bring Battle Beast into the equation.

It's great, although it lacks the original author's wonderful descriptions, but it's very good. I hope they maintain the story's structure and don't make the protagonist too strong too quickly; it kills the enjoyment and makes it predictable.

Psychological pressure is something difficult to bear. Humans are social beings by nature. The story is still in its very early stages. Naturally, I'd be scared and hide. Imagine being thrown into Warhammer 40k; you'd be drenched with fear. If I were in his place, I probably wouldn't get out of the instant dungeon if I didn't reach level 10,000.