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I think it's Cannon Fugaku being mentioned here. Thank you for reading!
Fixed to: Nearby, Kushina rolled her eyes. Despite her playful nature, she'd matured early, growing up independently in Konoha. Watching Tsunade, she couldn't help but think about how her older sister had fallen for Kawakaze's charm. Women in love can be so irrational, she thought with a sigh.
This is a narrative description, not Nawaki's thoughts, but "future Sannin" is added for better understanding. Fixed. Thx!
I don't think so, probably a translation mistake. Fixed! Thanks! : Even for him, a 600-billion-ryō worth in Explosive Tags is far beyond what he can handle.
Hahaha, How did I miss that? Thanks! Fixed.
* ryō, fixed.
Fixed.
Humm, I understand the concern since, in the first chapters, the translation was indeed a bit rough because I hadn’t translated a Naruto fanfic before. As for the "think about the plot" part, since this is just a translation, I don’t feel comfortable altering elements of the story. About "over glazing reactions," I believe this refers to how AI sometimes over-embellishes descriptions in assisted translations, right? Here’s an example as it appears in the story: "Looking at the determined Tsunade, he couldn't help but admire her strong-willed demeanor. She embodied the image of a powerful woman, a vision that stirred a faint sense of envy within him." A literal MTL would be: "Kawakaze looked at the spirited Tsunade, and the strong woman's appearance made him even more envious." Honestly, "envy" isn’t the best term to use here. For me, it feels like a minor detail, but I understand how it might disrupt the immersion for some readers. Corrected excerpt: Kawakaze looked at the high-spirited Tsunade, her commanding demeanor making her even more captivating. Anyway, thanks for the feedback! I’m always working to improve these issues. Sometimes, in a rushed translation, I might let a few things slip, but I think the final result is still enjoyable for most readers. That said, there’s always room for improvement! I hope you’ll give future fanfics here another chance, my friend. All the best to you! 😊
In Naruto? Well, if the plot demands it—just about anything!