ChillHenry

Nice story and translating, he has a second chance when he’s sent back in time with a system. It’s a story of redemption and starting over.

I like this story, it is an exciting mix of adventure and high-stakes action. James, suddenly thrown into a world of immersive, game-like challenges, must rely on his past gaming skills to navigate this new reality. It’s a story full of twists, where the protagonist is constantly pushed to adapt and face a changing world. Keep the good work and consistency :)

Fun, intriguing, interesting story. The mix of danger magic and a bit of mystery keeps things exiting. Perfect for fans who love to see the worlds they maybe already know in a different more interesting and fun frame.

Really great story. The excitement and challenges that a player face during all the journey makes it inspiring to read. It’s very well written. Easy to read and fun for anyone who plays or likes football or just a good story.