Vlad_6413

All this for nothing? Nah men, thats too much.

If you want to enjoy this, take your Brain and throw it out the window. Logic is missing in practially every chapter. Even calling it average would be quite generous.

The story started of great but got a little dissapointing in later chapters. It followed canon more and more as time goes on with just little differences, with the only explanation that Ian has to act because of Dumbledore. In my opinion thats just wasting a nice setting with good written characters. Also this so called Succubus System hasnt done really anything important by current chapter. Maybe that will still come but who knows.

Great Story so far. Keep the chapters coming.

Sure, there are people capaple of that. But MC of this Point in time shouldnt even have attempted that. That was just plain stupid.

Started of interesting but then just decided to copy the game for 10 chapters straight. Hope this doesnt continue in the future story. Also MC seems suicidal, i mean deciding to fight a chromed out cyberpsycho with a katana is just stupid.

By about chapter 70. Could be that it has been fixed in the meantime, but i dropped it there.

Alright. Too many Davids.

Absolutely stupid. MC throws around his treasures without any good explanation where he really got them from. Everybody would get suspicious about that, especially people like garb and dragon. Once or twice would be fine, but thats just stupid. Acts arrogant against celestial dragons while having no real power. Also already started to introduce bullshit chinese cultivation stuff.

The villain tag is absolutely deserved, be warned. It just takes a bit to really show. Great written story.