Daniel_Omega

The best Naruto fanfic I've read till date, I'm glad the author decided to add an OC character as the MC rather than Naruto or a famous Uchiha. The story starts slow but is filled with action-packed battles, an intelligent and ruthless MC, and a mix of OG and OC characters that fit well in the story. There's also a lot of attention paid to the world building and various chakra and ninjutsu, which are well crafted to blend with original Naruto techniques while also mixing in some more Chinese aesthetic.

I feel like these ratings are a lie. The story is filled with so much repetitive garbage, with a utter lack of creativity. It feels like a mashup of a bunch of xianxia harem novels, without any of the plot and action, and 90% filler. The MC is wishy washy with a constantly deteriorating IQ, and so are the female leads.

I understand that this is the author's first work, and it really shows with the absolutely horrid grammar and quality of the novel, which is something that shouldn't be overlooked since it can be fixed with a simple run-through with AI. The story itself is a disjointed mess with unlikeable, poorly written characters, and I couldn't stomach more than 15 chapters before dropping it. Not worth it even as a smut novel.

Trash with a beta MC. The world building is the only decent thing about the story, but even that isn't explored in detail. I gave the novel a try reading as many chapters as I could stomach before dropping it. The only thing I'm thankful for is that the novel doesn't waste your time letting you know how bad it is, so you can happily drop it if you can't stomach more than 10 chapters.