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I’m pleasantly surprised of the quality of this work and the depth of each character that we don’t see on the show. Is one of the best fanfic in this website that I have read Thanks for the translation
What a great story. I read the Chinese version and I got to said you turned dog crap to something special. Five star for you my boi[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
Great story and excellent way to articulate how the breath system works. Also I love that you are creative enough to not give him a system. I’m sick of that cliche. 5 star for you my boi.[img=update][img=update][img=update]
Love the story. Fate is one of my favorite series and to me danmachi has a lot of unexplored potential. Keep up the good work[img=update][img=update]
Great story and amazing take on David without the dumb system cliche that everyone uses. The writing needs work but the story is pretty good structure with good character interaction and solid story pacing